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Post by jelena on Jul 29, 2011 23:47:14 GMT
Oh, lie to me, it's the new poetry Anime Ginger xD »»»»»••○••«««««Ginger • Fitzgerald Age »» sixteen Gender »» female Species »» werewolf Sexuality »» straight Occupation »» Student Face Claim »» I dunno. Powers »»The werewolf part of her is Ferocious. She can tear anything apart with her bare hands. She is strong, She can lift up heavy things that humans cant. Ginger is very very fast. Faster than the other werewolves. She is smaller than the other werewolves, that is why she can run fast. She is in the rebel group and always has been. She loves turning into her werewolf form and going against them. She really hates humans but uses her human form to cover just in case something happens. She has gone into her wolf form and is proud of it. Appearance »»Ginger's height is 5'4 and her weight is 110. She is skinny and beautiful when she is a human. Her hair is red and has a white strand. She always wears that necklace around her neck to protect her even though it never does. It's the language that we speak Likes »»»» Sneaking out at night »» Likes being a badass »» fooling around with guys »» Werewolf transformation »» running Dislikes »»»» my sister who never agreed »» my sister dying »» spiders »» bears »» people Goals »»»» To get a BF »» To make friends Habits »»»» Killing people »» getting close to people Phobias »»»» Spiders »» Dying Overall Personality »» Im pretty much mean to people if there not nice to me. I once killed a girl who made fun of me. Very outspoken and when she has something to say, She will say it to you even if there is a crowd there. If something is terribly wrong she will get depressed easily. She is very outgoing too.
I've become numb I've become numb Mother »» Unknown Father »» Unknown Siblings »» Bridgett [dead] Pets »» Spike [Snake] History »»Ginger is pissed of at the world and is not afraid to let anyone know it, she serves as a protecter for her younger sister Bridgette. She is very manipulative of anyone even her sister, once she is bitten by the werewolf, she revels in the power and ablilty to show Bailey Downs and the people in to what she thinks of them. My Sister was like my best friend, We would do everything together until the nightmare came. When I got out of control with my transformation, I killed my sister by accident. But I stayed by her side. Not a day goes by that I think of her and everything. Read more: scarletrose.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=bioapp&action=display&thread=7#ixzz1TXXYU1Ni
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Post by Miss.Oreo on Jul 31, 2011 1:22:38 GMT
Ok. Your history is too short and you need to read the species information cause it doesn't match werewolves at all. (they can't be made by biting) Your history doesn't explain anything about your her sister really... Two sentences to sum up an entire personality is just not gonna fly. You need to add more to both your personality and history, and READ the werewolf information because you need to know it.
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Post by Miss.Oreo on Aug 1, 2011 5:12:42 GMT
This is what I think I should be seeing here...
Powers:
Stronger then the average human she is very capable of making a dent in your car. Her werewolf talent is speed. She is much faster then the werewolves with strength as their talent, but she isn't as strong as them. Her small size helps her speed as well. She has long claws that have the same toxin as other werewolves and can melt through organic materials with the toxin.
Appearance:
Ginger's height is 5'4 and her weight is 110. She is skinny and beautiful when she is a human. Her hair is red and has a white strand. She always wears that necklace around her neck to protect her even though it never does. She has big green eyes that sparkle. Her hair is long coming down to her mid-back. She has sun-kissed skin and a thin frame. She is short and a total cutie.
In werewolf form she is small, with mud brown fur. She has large canines that are long and strong. Her green eyes stay the same sparkling green. She is a good looking female, and looks healthy and fit.
Personality:
Im pretty much mean to people if there not nice to me. I once killed a girl who made fun of me, and I don't really regret it. Very outspoken and when she has something to say, She will say it to you even if there is a crowd there. If something is terribly wrong she will get depressed easily. She is very outgoing too. Ginger is capable of standing up for herself, but she isn't any kind of angel. With a bad girl personality she isn't known for being the most talkative and people friendly. She likes to mess around with the males, and sneak out at night. Ginger isn't afraid of getting in a fight, and can kick butt. The girl isn't afraid of killing either...
The female loves being in her werewolf form. She likes to run, since it is her werewolf talent to be fast instead of strong. Ginger is always thinking about her sister, and was a good sister until her sister died. She still hasn't gotten over it completely. She is touchy, and can snap at you. She even killed another female for making fun of her once...
History & Family :
For the family she needs to have parents there, and in parentheses you need to say she doesn't know them. I have no idea what I should tell you to write because, well you don't have enough detail in what you already have at all. Why doesn't she know her parents? ( as pack animals werewolves are very close knit families and usually if they don't have family or something others in the pack will care for them)Why is she mad at the world? What happened to her sister? When and why exactly did she kill the girl teasing her? How did she get away with murder? DETAIL DETAIL DETAIL, and also you still haven't read the werewolf species information, and if you can't even finish your bio right without reading it then it should be obvious to you that you need to read it. Sorry, but I don't think you should be rping until you have read at least that...
Overall : Add detail, that is what this is lacking. In fact its lacking even general ideas. Keep in mind what I have given you here is how I perceived her from what you gave me, and is pretty much minimum of the amount of information I should be seeing here. I want you to take this as an example and some help and fix your bio.
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